Mirrorless

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"Mirrorless girl, that I can never see
For your beauty remains a mystery,

Mirrorless girl I will never view,
The forbidden beauty of you"
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This is a prize for ~A-Killer-Artist. She won first place at #KawaiiHaven's Mascot Contest.
Fail poem, is fail .___. I wrote the poem based off the concept of this piece where I had no idea what the character looked like and had to imagine what I thought the person looked like. My only details of the girl were, she is half-Asian and she has dark, brown wavy hair. I was going to add a background to this, but got lazy maybe one day I will I'm sorry that her hair coloring is horrid, I was trying to make brown, and I well ended up with that . . .
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What I've learned:
I am going to add this little list to all my newest artworks, they are not meant to point out flaws but to tell me what I know I can improve on
∎ The shoulders are too low, and too small
∎ the head is too big in comparison to the body
∎ neck is to short, should be taller
∎ I over saturated the eyes ;^;
∎ I completely failed on making the correct shade of brown

"The road to success is paved with failures"
"and so is the road to failures" ;^;

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Time: 30 min sketching, 20 min inking, 2 hours painting
Media & Material:Van Gogh Watercolors, Copic Sketch Markers, Sakura Microns, Copic Multiliners, Canson Watercolor 160 g paper
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Critique Desired: I do desire critique, but please be mature when critiquing. I do not wish for worship and I do not wish for hating, I wish for help and motivation and tips to help me improve as an artist.

Open your mind before you open your mouth.
Thank you.